Critical Appreciation of the poem 'Orange' by DianeAH from United States.

Dr Zik Zafar Iqbal Khokhar the inventor of Zikorean English Poetry from Jhelum Pakistan the land of scholars and poets formerly the land of martyres

Orange

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orange, autumn's color

that carpets the ground

and I walk through leaves

thinking about spring . . .

leaving the leaves

a good thing

for my back

and the grass

Analysis:

It's like a voice of every ❤️ heart. No one want to stay in autumn. Diane AH, your use of metaphors 'carpet' for circumstances, 'walk' for struggle in life, and 'spring' for success at last, are matchless. These gems have made the poem wonderful.
I enjoyed reading this brevity.

Nicely done

References:

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https://allpoetry.com/poem/16815359-orange-by-DianeAH-noguest

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https://allpoetry.com/topic/show/269083944-Critical-Appreciation-of-the-poem-Orange-by-DianeAH-from-United-States.