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A Critical Appreciation of the poem ‘One day the clouds written by famous poet Shea Savage from the Tennessee United States.
‘One day the clouds’ is a beautiful poem written by Shea Savage from Tennessee, United States.
Talking about the theme of the poem, the poet has used forceful language to depict the revolutionary change in the world, which is the core need of our societies. Clouds, sky, flood, desert, valleys, climb, eyes, world, and look, are the golden words to emphasize the importance of the theme and step-by-step revolutionary stages.
By observing the structural analysis of the poem, we meet with the prominent Zikorean poet who is smiling from Tennessee, United States.
Zinet poems are mentioned and Ziket poems are unmentioned, only the syllables of the first and second lines are discussed well. In this way, the structural analysis of this poem shows two poetic trends of English literature: Ziket, and Zinet, and the mixed color of the two Zikorean poetic styles.
Ziket is defined as:
1. A Ziket consists of two poetic lines.
2. The first line has 1 to 8 syllables and the second line has 1 to 5 syllables or vice versa depending upon the mood and revelation of the poet.
3. The longest Ziket has a total of 13 syllables. e.g. Walt Whitman’s
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4. The shortest Ziket has a total of 2 syllables; https://bit.ly/3rLDVaU
one syllable in each poetic line.
Zinet
Zinet is the shortest poetic form in English and the world. It consists of only one poetic line to write or compose a whole poem. It has only 1 to 5 syllables. It has only 5 types. The longest Zinet contains 5 syllables to express the theme of the poem.
The shortest poetic form in English in the world is “First Type Zinet’ which has only one syllable in a unique single poetic line, for example, my first type of Zinet poems on the All Poetry is:
Achievements of the World
Wow!
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Pangs and Worries
Ah!
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One day the clouds
will be too heavy for the sky;
(The first line contains 4 syllables out of a total of 5 ones and the second line has 8 syllables out of a total of 8 ones)
their descent
will flatten our cities.
(The first line contains 3 syllables out of a total of 5 ones and the second line has 6 syllables out of a total of 8 ones)
Crawling out
from under their girth,
(The first line contains 3 syllables out of a total of 5 ones and the second line has 5 syllables out of a total of 8 ones)
we will blink the fog
from our eyes
(The first line contains 5 syllables out of a total of 5 ones and the second line has 3 syllables out of a total of 8 ones)
and begin to climb.
(The single poetic line that has 5 syllables out of 5 ones. It is a good example of a Zinet poem)
All lines erased,
deserts flooded,
(The first line contains 4 syllables out of a total of 5 ones and the second line has 4 syllables out of a total of 8 ones)
valleys filled–
(The single poetic line that has 3 syllables out of 5 ones. It is a good example of a Zinet poem)
out from the misty summit
of the thunderhead, look! —
(The first line contains 7 syllables out of a total of 8 ones and the second line has 5 syllables out of a total of 5 ones if the poet considers the second line without ‘the’ to follow the Ziket rules. This change doesn’t change the theme of the poem or these lines)
a softer,
bigger world.
(The first line contains 3 syllables out of a total of 8 ones and the second line has 3 syllables out of a total of 5 ones)
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